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| Forfatter: | Link [ 28 feb 2010 22:40 ] |
| Titel: | Dreamland |
A featus in my mind dancing, dancing up and down my spine unaware of what you find a paradise lost or a world divine Next of kin inherit the time to come The sound of a heart, your mother a powerhouse-drum the countdown for you to appear Piruetting, red days tunnel, tunnel, a tunnel of hope shadows loom, mystery rays an embryo-code brings a time to cope Stargazer you've tasted it, now you want more umbrilical cord, motherlode you're right at the core you arrive from the well of souls Eyes closed, yet open wide waiting, waiting for light to unfold: Swim fish, jump squirrel, fly kite mama behold, mama behold timekeeper you wind and wind, setting the clock ever so readyto take the leap yet each tic and toc makes the end of a richer man Time turns your way with a nod Dreamland, your dreamland, conquerer ride go for the world, win the lot hence, yours is this kingdom of light Feedback? |
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| Forfatter: | Jack Bauer [ 02 mar 2010 04:49 ] |
| Titel: | Re: Dreamland |
Jeg synes det er meget flot, lækker sammensætning. Må dog sige at der bliver lidt for meget foster til min smag. Jeg tror jeg ved hvor du vil hen, men "an embryo-code brings a time to cope" og "umbrilical cord, motherlode" havde været bedre udelukket. Jeg er dog ingen stor poet, og jeg flame mig endelig hvis jeg er way off.. |
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| Forfatter: | PiratPåRom [ 12 mar 2010 01:54 ] |
| Titel: | Re: Dreamland |
ordene smager godt nok i min mund |
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